tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16114014.post5158509656288459334..comments2011-03-25T23:15:01.319-07:00Pete Solowayhttps://profiles.google.com/106529244906115289196noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16114014.post-46455926431001943642010-01-20T22:54:04.000-08:002010-01-20T22:54:04.000-08:00After more than a second glance, I'm still not sure what's happening in the last panel? He's throwing up? The published version works better.Mark Stivershttp://www.markstivers.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16114014.post-31937909218444624622010-01-20T22:51:06.000-08:002010-01-20T22:51:06.000-08:00Really great.Mark Stivershttp://www.markstivers.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16114014.post-77367255136558034742009-11-16T10:11:37.000-08:002009-11-16T10:11:37.000-08:00Superman on top of her talk bubble, nice idea and execution.jeremynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16114014.post-69501525836256385822009-11-12T15:52:28.000-08:002009-11-12T15:52:28.000-08:00Critics of the alternate ending mainly argued that it took them a second glance to figure out what was going on in the last panel, and in that split second the gag was lost. I can understand that, and maybe at some point I'll make a color version that'll work better.Petehttp://doesstuff.comnoreply@blogger.com